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*Read all the way through before making comments please.*

I am in death
I am and death
I am out death
I am of death
I am peace death
I am and death
I am war death
I am from death
I am peaceful death
I am meadow death
I am to death
I am blood death
I am and death
I am gore death
I am everyone death
I am would death
I am just death
I am agree death
I am that death
I am this death
I am is death
I am just death
I am a death
I am killing death
I am spree death
I am I death
I am think death
I am people death
I am are death
I am good death
I am at death
I am heart death
I am at death
I am least death
I am they death
I am are death
I am straight death
I am from death
I am the death
I am start death
I am we death
I am have death
I am tried death
I am to death
I am stop death
I am this death
I am sinning death
I am but death
I am no death
I am this death
I am is death
I am only death
I am the death
I am beginning death

Now go back and read the third word of each line to read this poem.
12/31 to 1/22

I wrote this while I was watching a documentary on the American Revolution, so blame the documentary...

Very long, I know. But I think it's really good...

100 Themes project --->[link]

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YamiKatherine Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2007   Writer
Intrequing concept to make you get into the middle of the topic, nearly interact with it
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Ryous-lil-Hentai Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2007
Thank you :D
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SaffronWolf21 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2007
Clever. :D Its cool. :D
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Ryous-lil-Hentai Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2007
Thank you! =D
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SaffronWolf21 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2007
Uh-huh. :D :D :D
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drop-asd Featured By Owner May 21, 2007
Fucking original! I'd have never thought of something like this! I'm just speechless! :omg: :wow:
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Ryous-lil-Hentai Featured By Owner May 21, 2007
WHOO!
And thank you so much for the fave! I love you know =33 :glomp:
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Ryous-lil-Hentai Featured By Owner May 21, 2007
sorry, I meant "now" hehe. ^^;
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drop-asd Featured By Owner May 21, 2007
No problem, I'm really happy that someone loves me. :heart: :hug:
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Ryous-lil-Hentai Featured By Owner May 22, 2007
whoo! :glomp:
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anniken Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2007
By the fifth line I noticed what was going on, at that point completely overwhelmed by how insanely deep it would have to be for it to make sense :XD:

I really liked it. Strong rhythm and message. :) It still applied to every day occurings too. The world's really messed up these days!
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Ryous-lil-Hentai Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2007
Aww man! You're the first person to find the pattern that fast...grr...

Thank you! And yeah, the world's gone crazy. =]

Thanks for the fav! :glomp:
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DracozGal Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2007
i love this, its really good, congrats on a gr8 piece
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Ryous-lil-Hentai Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2007
thanks a bunch :glomp:
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Kenouni-Renashin Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2007
I like what you did with the whole concealing the true meaning inside the poem thing. *Nods* Yeah 'cause I make sense. ^_^

It's very good, and has threads of truth in it too. ^_^
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Ryous-lil-Hentai Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2007
lol jk. you do make sence =D
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Ryous-lil-Hentai Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2007
yup you do :roll:

thank you! and yeah, it really does
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BeckyTheHacker Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2007
...You already know my comments from class. xD;;

Still, pretty clever! I've never seen a poem written that way! :thumbsup:
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Ryous-lil-Hentai Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2007
hehe yup! and thanks =D
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Lisaaah Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2007
nice.! but you made me read the whole freaking thing before i read it over again.. ! smart ass =d
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Ryous-lil-Hentai Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2007
hehe =D
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